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@ 2004-06-24 18:00:00
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PoT: Challenge: Glory

Fic post from my archive.

Glory

Just before the end of Chapter Ten Kirihara comes to talk to Yukimura about his final match at Regionals. Drama, I-3

If a hawk could smile, it might smile the way Yukimura-san was now.


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[info]soloproject
2004-06-24 10:25 pm UTC (link)
Aw...I can't believe this! I was crossing my fingers for aomething Akaya and Yukimura about what were talking about before about what buchou would think about his plays style and the match with Fuji...and would you look at that. *stares wonderingly* You must be psychic. @_______@

You have such incredible grasp of characterization, so I understand this is most likely the exact way Yukimura would react to to Akaya if they ever talked about that match. If it were me, I would chew his arm off, literally.

He's so nice though, isn't he? Too bad nice is scary. He would probably get along either incredibly well with Fuji or terribly. At least the tension in any room with the both of them in it would so thick. =___=

Hee~! *bounces* There's more, yay!

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-24 11:30 pm UTC (link)
*flourishing bow* I do try; and I set you up to expect this one, so I don't suppose I can claim to be psychic quite yet. ^_-

*whistles* Well, you know, Yukimura knows that Fuji was injured, deliberately, by one of his players, and it's his duty as captain to take responsibility for that, so I'm kind of figuring there will be some visits in the near future...

Well, as soon as I finish the Reunion of The Three, and the SanaKiri smut, anyway. *dashes off*

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[info]soloproject
2004-06-24 11:43 pm UTC (link)
Wha~!!? Did I read right? SanaKiri smuuuuttt...yey!

And I hope there will be YukiFuji interaction in the future. *nods something fierce*

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[info]lechaco
2004-06-24 11:05 pm UTC (link)
hee I pictured something like this would happen and here it is XD so great *_*

your characterization of Yukimura is awesome and thorough. you developed his character without straying outside the limits defined by canon yet Yukimura is still a rich character. that was what jumped out at me in this arc besides the YagyuuxNiou interaction. I can't wait to read more :3~

If a hawk could smile, it might smile the way Yukimura-san was now.

Yesssss *_____*!!! I totally agree. and I totally agree with [info]soloproject that Yuki and Fuji would get along (or hate each other but I'd rather see the optomistic side, ne). :3 Fuji and Yuki as girlfriends is such wonderful crack <3

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-24 11:34 pm UTC (link)
*bounces* Thank you! Yukimura is one of my favorites; I've been dying to get to his pov.

*falls over laughing* Oh, yes, and they could go shopping together, and trade tips on how to get a stoic boyfriend to say five words in a row, and plan to take over the world! *nods* It'd be perfect.

Seriously, I have a feeling Yukimura is going to wig Fuji out just a little, the first time they meet. Should be fun.

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[info]lechaco
2004-06-25 04:48 am UTC (link)
oh have you read the dialogue between Fuji and Yuki in RabuPuri? XD It's one of the most wonderful things I've ever read. It shows so much about Yuki. First piece of hard evidence (from one type of canon) that he is indeed sneaky. (I loved how he just brushed off finding Akaya for information XD XD XD)

I think this might amuse you >:3~~

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-25 03:44 pm UTC (link)
*grins* Fun dialogue. You figure, Yukimura must be good at juggling; he has to do it all the time, with such a fractious team. And can also hand out pretty stiff penalties, when he's annoyed.

*howls over picture* Nice legs, Sei-chan! *wolf whistle* *flees from Sanada's glare*

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[info]annotated_em
2004-06-24 11:20 pm UTC (link)
"I watched the tape of the match," Yukimura-san told him.

Ah-hah! So you've SEEN Pod!Ryouma! You've seen the truth, haven't you? Haven't you?!

Yukimura: Really, don't you think the joke is wearing thin by now?

Meep. [joins Kirihara in feeling about one centimeter tall]

Ahem. On to a more serious comment-style. ^^;

He tried not to show that yearning too plainly. The gentle denial in Yukimura-san's gaze hurt too much.

[pets Kirihara, gingerly, as one might pet a puppy recently recovered from rabies] There, there. That sounds more like a "Not yet" than a "No way in hell" to me, kiddo. [petpet]

[contented sigh]

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-24 11:41 pm UTC (link)
*tiny smile* While I was writing this Yukimura wanted to know if he should just start calling himself Atlanta. I said it was Fuji who liked apples, and he gave me a Look.

*snugs* There will be both smoosh and smut to distract you soon, my dear. *pets*

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[info]annotated_em
2004-06-24 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Smoosh! Smut! Splendid!

...I wish I hadn't left my notebooks of tenipuri-ness back in Bloomington. I think working through with the revising and such would be good for me at the moment.

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-06-25 02:32 pm UTC (link)
I love you; you're a goddess; and I can't wait for the promised goodies.

[thinks]

yep. that pretty much sums everything up ^.^;;

You know, I wouldn't be a lick surprised if Fuji and Yuki don't already know each other--yeah, they go way back {nodsnods} Yeah, hey, isn't Rikkai dai located in Chiba? And even so... I'm sure those two ran across each other occassionally on the elem. circuit.... not to mention, I can just *picture* Yukimura talking to Tezuka and then suddenly asking to be introduced to Fuji... and... .*bam*! instant, sadistical-manipulative-bastards-we-love-too-much-to-hate-and-dammit-they're-cute-too friendship is sparked.... Nothing romantic, or anything like that... just a... kindred of spirits, shall we say? {grins}

yeah, I know, I'm procrastinating and running away from the sudden Niou-Yagyuu plot bunny that hunted me down today... meep! help! I think it sees me!

[runs away. runs away quick]

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-25 03:51 pm UTC (link)
Goodies on the way!

Ah ha! *tackles Andrea so plot bunny can catch up* Here, little plot bunny; nice bunny. See the nice writer? Mmm, tasty.

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-06-26 01:19 am UTC (link)
traitor.

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-26 01:22 am UTC (link)
*wicked grin*

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-06-26 01:28 am UTC (link)
Oh, hey. hmm... weren't *you* gonna write something involving Bunta and Jackal? oh, and Sanada and Elf-boy?

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-06-26 01:28 am UTC (link)
And dont' forget about the Yukimura & Fuji!

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-26 01:34 am UTC (link)
Wasn't planning on D2, but the SanaKiri is in proofing, and the one with Yukimura and Fuji sparks is begun. So, I'd say it's only fair for you to contribute some D1. *feeds carrots to plot bunny*

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-06-26 01:36 am UTC (link)
Hai, hai...

[pouts] poor Jackal and Bunta... {sniffles} And Jackal's such a sexy thing with that dark skin and bald head of his.... And Bunta's so cute....

Oh well. I could always counter with that weird Bunta-Niou thought from yesterday. Maybe.

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[info]naanima
2004-06-27 11:40 am UTC (link)
Your Yukimura make my life complete. He's perfect, he's wonderful, and why the hell isn't Konomi giving us this Yukimura? Grr.

Everytime I read a piece of your Rikkai fiction I'm always amazed by your characterisation of them. You get them perfectly right. Kirihara is so adorable, and so innocent. Yukimura knows this, but he'll not let this get in the way of making Kirihara realise his full potential.

Darling, I LOVE you! *clings to knees*

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[info]branchandroot
2004-06-27 05:46 pm UTC (link)
*hunkers down to snuggle*

I know! Nice as the Sanada v Ryouma match is, I want it to hurry up and finish so we have room for more Yukimura! We need more Yukimura!

I trust all the fans in Japan are communicating this need, so we have a chance of actually getting some.

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