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PoT: Challenge: Credit

Fic post from my archive.

Credit

This story takes place in a quantum bubble of the Challengeverse (maybe it happened, maybe it didn't), immediately following "The Continuation of War". Tezuka offers Oishi some support after his very bad day. Porn with Characterization, I-3

It had not been a relaxing day for Oishi Shuichirou.


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[info]anruik
2004-07-09 12:25 am UTC (link)
You spoil us, you know *amused, snugs* Not that we mind, of course~ *innocent*

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 01:20 am UTC (link)
*pious expression* It's only right to be nice to people. *grin*

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[info]annotated_em
2004-07-09 12:38 am UTC (link)
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Is there anything you write that won't turn me into Em-goo? No? I thought not.

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 01:23 am UTC (link)
*pets Em-goo, gingerly* And thank you for encouraging me, my dear!

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[info]naanima
2004-07-09 01:29 am UTC (link)
....

Tezuka/Oishi porn.

....

*fans self*

More?

*dump truck after truck of truffles*

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[info]anruik
2004-07-09 02:08 am UTC (link)
She dumped truffles.... The ULTIMATE REWARD! *gasps*

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 02:38 am UTC (link)
^___^

But, darling, now I have to go write the Yanagi/Inui you wanted. *eyes Tezuka and Oishi* I have to say, though, they certainly made it easier for me than I was expecting. Such obliging boys. I may come back to them. *pets*

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[info]annotated_em
2004-07-09 02:57 am UTC (link)
Oishi is nothing if not obliging. Even when you're putting him through the angst wringer.

Oishi: [grimace] Damn my accomodating nature.

Yanagi/Inui! Squee! SQUEE!

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[info]naanima
2004-07-09 03:02 am UTC (link)
Then IGNORE everything EXCEPT for the Yanagi/Inui!!!!

Just the thought of Yanagi/Inui make me squee with happiness and joy.

(Of course they are obliging. They know their chances of failure very well. So they may as well sit back and enjoy the ride ^___^)

Love you darling *hugglesglomp*

*waits*

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[info]soloproject
2004-07-09 03:13 am UTC (link)
No...why? WHY? Now I WON'T EVER GET USED TO THE IDEA OF TEZUKA BEING WITH ANYONE ELSE! AUGH!

It really doesn't get better than this...except um...*cough* YanaInui and...*hack*FujiKiri... ♥ I've missed this pair, really, I have. \(^o^)/

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 03:47 am UTC (link)
*blinks innocently* Well, you could go back and read the TezuAto. Would that help? *wicked grin*

*snuggles*

Erm. You realize that if I write FujiKiri it's likely to be somewhat similar to the FujiMizu? Like, kinda, darksmut? I'm not sure I can do that to Kiri-elf.

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[info]soloproject
2004-07-09 06:06 am UTC (link)
Hmm...mebbe. Is that the fishing one? *raises eyebrow*

Yes, darksmut. Exactly. Is there some kind of ummm...like a fluffy red-eyed black plot bunny amongst the fray?

But ok...I'll take read your FujiMizu stuff again and leave you alone on the *cough* FujiKiri. XD

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[info]lechaco
2004-07-09 03:16 am UTC (link)
wonderful once again even if I don't ship this pairing. XD; very erotic :B

chaco would be one happy kitty if you write AtoYuki *coughs* :D;;;;;;;;

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 03:49 am UTC (link)
*scratches head* Usually I don't either; it just happened. But, glad you liked it!

*sighs*

*eyes AtoYuki bunny*

*bunny bounces cutely*

*holds out arms* If this actually goes anywhere, I shall be sure to blame you for it. ^_-

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[info]lechaco
2004-07-09 03:54 am UTC (link)
haha I wish I were that good with pairings I don't ship. if I don't ship it, if I don't feel their mojo, it's very hard for me to come up with anything for them. XD but you did so well here :D!

yay the AtoYuki bunny may have a new home :D!! thanks XD<3 you're awesome. oh I wholly blame myself too. XD I don't even know how I got on the topic of AtoYuki but once I got onto it, I started liking it and omg it just works so well with renaissance and art and kfdlajdk *brain breaks from the pretty overload*

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 04:50 am UTC (link)
Art. Art models. Oh, yeah, I can work with that. Oo, in the garden. Yeah, the value of natural lighting, and all that. Museum trip, as the catalyst.

Pardon, plotting out loud. *files after YukiKiri*

^_^

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 03:27 am UTC (link)
{blinksblinks}

Omake... means... parody, ne?

Don't get me wrong... it was--is--a good story... but... but... {spurtters} It's OISHI! and TEZUKA! WTF!!! {wails and pulls at hair}

My brain... can't... compute....

Other than that minor user-problem...

Really did like way you described the relationship between captain and vice captain... and between these two friends. How they can support each other with Oishi's openness and Tezuka's seemingly unending strength...

(and then my brain fried when they started kissing >.< )

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 03:52 am UTC (link)
Well, it used to. Best I can tell, omake is one of those words like otaku or yaoi that has altered significantly since the US fanbase got ahold of it. The, er, consensus definition seems to be something like "extra" or "spinoff", though it is still used in its traditional sense by those who can actually pull it off. /linguistics lecture

*bounces* Lookee, I fried her brain! Go me!

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 04:19 am UTC (link)
really? I mean, I first learned of 'omake' through the fanbase, that it should be like a mockery of certain scenes... like the screen caps after the credits of the show--the chibi caps? an omake...

{waves hand} I'll ask my boss at class tonight.

And it's not nice to fry your readers brains!!!! How I'm a supposed to WRITE when my brain is *fried*???? HUH????

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[info]branchfic
2004-07-09 04:41 am UTC (link)
*stares into space*

I am taken with a sudden vision of this story taking place during the closing credits of Continuation, in chibi form.

*falls out of chair laughing*

OMG. Ok, excuse me, but I am inspired, and must go change the title, right now. Oh, it's perfect.

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 06:12 am UTC (link)
huh? what?

{blinks}

{thinks}|

{re-reads}

@.@ Ooooooh...

{falls out of chair laughing}

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 06:23 am UTC (link)
huh? what?

{blinks}

{thinks}|

{re-reads}

@.@ Ooooooh...

{falls out of chair laughing}

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 04:47 am UTC (link)
*snickering* Ah, thank you for inspiring a real title for this one, dear.

You've probably been in the fanbase long enough to have learned the term before the meaning really started to slip. It never fails to astonish me how fast it can happen, I mean, a matter of a year or two in online-based communities.

This does not stop me from railing against fate when it's an annoying shift. For instance, all the signs here in Ohio that say "Stop here to actuate signal." Yes, help that traffic light be all it can be! *facepalm*

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 06:28 am UTC (link)
Oh, jeesh... I've only been in the fanbase for... for... {blinks} well, damn... five? six years? shit... That's not *that* long, really...

{pouting} glad I could help inspire... even if it's *still* an Oishi & Tezuka fic....

Hey! I thought there was supposed to be Fuji & Tezu action!!!!

Okay... gotta ask... "Stop here to actuate signal"??? Huh???

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 04:47 pm UTC (link)
Well, they mean "activate signal", but someone in the State Department of Signs messed up, lo these many years ago, and all the signs at traffic lights that tell you where the weight-plates are say "actuate" instead. *shakes head*

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-11 11:53 am UTC (link)
yes. in case you were wondering, I *did* notice how you avoiding the other comments....

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-11 03:28 pm UTC (link)
*sighs* Darn. The thing is I never intended this to go TezuFujiwards. *pauses* Of course, I never actually intended it to go TezuOishiwards, either...

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-11 03:32 pm UTC (link)
{sniffles} {pouts} well, okay.... as long as the characters are surprising *you*, too... {grins}

{wonders what *other* surprises are in store...}

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[info]anruik
2004-07-09 05:52 am UTC (link)
"Omake" is generally the same as "Extra". Kind of like an added little thing just because the author/mangaka feels like adding it in. It's just that omake usually ends up being comedic, though not always.

Ex: Ever read some of the Gundam manga? Those little chibi comic strips at the end of the books? Like how to draw Trowa, or Heero using Duo's braid for a brush? That sort of thing? Those are omake.

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 06:33 am UTC (link)
Yeah! yeah! I guess because they always seem comedic I just associated them with 'parody'.


(and yes, although it's been a while, I do remember the 'braid for a paint brush' incident' ^__^)

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[info]anruik
2004-07-09 08:34 am UTC (link)
It's hard to forget that braid for a brush incident. XD

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[info]mica_chan
2004-07-09 01:04 pm UTC (link)
I really had to laught with your reaction because....I've always been so in love with Tezuka/Oishi pair. To me (even though I love a lot of pairs in PoT) they are one of the best couple in this anime.
I never could understang why people couldn't see how well they are together...

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-09 01:09 pm UTC (link)
Oh, no! I can completely read any pairing. Usually. And normally I don't have a problem (well, there was this one fic, but I've erased it from my memory), but...

but... but... This story had all the setting ups for a Fuji-Tez relationship... and my mind had fitted itself for that schema... and then...

WHAM!!! I literally... could not... compute... my brain actually stopped reading and understanding what was going on right after Tezuka kissed Oishi.

I swear... it's the weirdest thing... I don't think it's ever happened to me before.... >.< '''

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[info]mica_chan
2004-07-09 01:47 pm UTC (link)
Heheheheh...I think I can understand you. Unfortunatly (or fortunatly) I don't share the same destiny, because even if I could see the hints to a TezuFuji story, I also could see the base to a wonderful TezukaOishi. But this, probably is because I love this pair and can't imagine one without other (I really never was a Golden Pair fan or a TezukaFuji fan).

Sometimes I envy who can read all kind of pairs...I'm not like this. When I dislike something (like MomoRyo, for example...or Golden Pair) I can't force myself into it (with rare, rare exceptions).

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-11 11:37 am UTC (link)
There were no *hints* for Fuji-Tez, it was darn right *blatant*... Even Yukimura said so. {nods}

Still, I'll admit to there not being enough good Tezu-Oishi fics out there.

See, in my mind, the characters naturally pair off--funnily enough, into all the Seigaku pairings you don't like. ^.^--but if the story is well written and the characterization done right, it's easy to see how any pairing might couple. It's the same with the boys being straight. I can see them all being hetero without stretching my mind to the limits, but if I'm going to read it in a story (even mine) I want it to be darn right believable.

You know what I'm saying?

We've got ourselves a great author here, though, so I'm sure now that I've given my mind a chance to adjust to the shock of it all, there won't be any problem.

In fact (after being *forced* {grins teasingly} to like Tez/Atobe), I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out... She has her work cut out for her, though, doesn't?

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never thought I'd see this
[info]issen4
2004-07-09 11:47 am UTC (link)
A convincing Tezuka and Oishi, that is. I guess it's because it's all Golden Pair, Golden Pair, and occasionally I get the crazy (heretical?) thought maybe they aren't married; after all, Eiji didn't even know that Oishi was a bowling enthusiast in the bowling episode. But there's so much GP--and some of it is lovely so I treat all of it as AU.

Ahem, to get back to the point. I love your Oishi. It's nice to know that he's not some super-patient, long-suffering Japanese boy who gets stamped with the 'mother' label. Well, not one who doesn't get any sex, anyway. Especially sex with Tezuka-with-personality.

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 04:50 pm UTC (link)
*beams* Thank you!

Poor Oishi, it almost makes me wonder what Konomi had against him to put that 'mother of Seigaku' line in his actual profile info. I mean, talk about a curse. He deserves good sex. *firm nod*

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[info]mica_chan
2004-07-09 12:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh, my God! I. LOVE. YOU! I really, really love. You don't have any idea how happy you made me.
I simple LOVE Tezuka and Oishi together. They are the best pair in my opinion. I love, love, love them. And it's so rare to find any fic with them together. Everybody always write Tezuka with Fuji and...well, that's not a pair that I like. And Tezuka/Oishi is a rarity and you as always were perfect. So, I love you even more now for doing it.

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much.

And I know I didn't do any sense in this comment, but...that's because I'm too happy to be real ^_^

*** PS: I'm definetly not used to listen Oishi being called Shuichirou...

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-09 04:55 pm UTC (link)
You're very, very welcome! The bunny just kind of pounced on me, and it was so soft and fluffy that I had to write it. Glad you liked it! I like to keep my best readers happy. ^_^

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-12 11:48 am UTC (link)
very few people gave Tezuka attitude for long once they had played against him. Well, very few people, aside from Echizen, who gave absolutely everybody attitude, and could actually be considered becomingly respectful, by comparison, for moderating the back talk he gave his captain.

{laughing} you know... this reminds me of what Aishuu and I were talking about with Echizen and his maturity--or lack there of--and how his attitude towards respect is very much one of a more American upbringing.

~~

it had been the crack about Niou's own captain that had been the last straw

This is such a telling observation about Oishi's character. Where Yukimura would have laughed it off and/or played into Niou's teasing, Oishi took offense for him... or maybe I'm reading this wrong?

~~~

sspp... I noticed this 'cause of someone else's comment, but, the third paragraph---"Oishi's teeth were grinding"...

~~~

mmmm... Tezuka's hands... massage.... damn, I bet that feels good....


~~~

I don't know... maybe I'm a liar, and I really can't read most pairings... but this.. still didn't sit right with me. Not so much with it being Tezuka and Oishi, but... but with it being Tezuka. Tezuka seemed off to me. I haven't placed my finger on it yet, but when I do...

:-/ Perplexed.


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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-12 03:46 pm UTC (link)
but, the third paragraph---"Oishi's teeth were grinding"...

*facepalm* Oops. Thank you.

Hm. If you do pin it down, let me know. I know I do take advantage of the fact that you can ascribe just about any emotion to Tezuka in private; I may have taken it too far in this one. Maybe the implied history needs to be fleshed out more to support their interaction?

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[info]lady_readwolf
2004-07-12 09:43 pm UTC (link)
yeah, I figured you'd want to know about that--I honestly didn't notice it the first couple of times, I'm so used to switching back and forth in my own narratives. ^.^;;

Hmmm... good point. You're right. that's it. Tezuka just seems too... emotionally *open* all of a sudden...

{happyily} well, that solves that mystery! Now, when's the next part???

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[info]histoirede
2004-07-28 09:20 pm UTC (link)
You made my day with this fic.
Tezuka x Oishi is so raaaaare and it was so well described, and Oishi's pov is just perfect and
*o* that I can't be constructive. I love this pairing so much and your fic was marvelous, so thank you !!

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[info]branchandroot
2004-07-29 01:14 am UTC (link)
You're most welcome, and thank you very much! This story kind of took me by surprise, so it's good to hear it turned out well.

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[info]unknownhasunuma
2004-09-19 07:40 pm UTC (link)
Hi! I'm [info]unknownhasunuma and I help run Touka Koukan. I've tried to contact you a few times through your web-site, but am unsure if the e-mail went through. So, I'll try this way!

Anyway, I was just wondering if you'd be at all interested in letting me host some/all of your FMA Yaoi fanfiction. If you don't want to, take a look at the site anyway! ♥ I apologize if you just didn't want to respond to the e-mail, but I don't remember getting a response from you. So, I thought it might be a good idea to send you a comment incase the e-mail just didn't make it!

Feel free to respond to me at:
E-mail - sockren@toukakoukan.com
AIM - Unknown Hasunuma
Livejournal - [info]unknownhasunuma

I hope this reaches you and thank you for taking the time to read this!

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[info]branchandroot
2004-09-19 08:22 pm UTC (link)
*blinks* Yes, I recognize the archive. I remember one email from you, and I did write back that you could archive my fic. Odd; maybe our mailservers don't like each other, or something. At any rate, yes, feel free to archive any of my FMA fic that seems to fit your site. The versions at my webpage are the most recent revisions. (The formatting is css, you can just strip that out of the header.) Cheers!

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[info]unknownhasunuma
2004-09-21 07:10 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I apologize for the miscommunication! Awesome! ♥

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[info]solaas
2005-01-27 11:55 pm UTC (link)
Whatwhatwhat?! *sparkles*

Ohmigosh! What a totally unexpected and utterly delightful little surprise! Imagine that; Ooishi and Tezuka. Intimate. Together. Love this -- absolutely adore it! *_*



(Tinyminimal unimportant nitpick: The heat wound it's way into his bones... There's an its/it's error in there. <:) )

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[info]branchandroot
2005-01-28 12:18 am UTC (link)
*pleased* It surprised me, too! It just... popped out of the end of "Continuation". These two are a sweet pair to write, though. Even when they're having wild sex in the locker room they're pretty sweet. *giggles*

*checks final revisions* Ack! It even made it though there! Thank you for pointing that one out. I do that constantly. ^_^;

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